My Original Novels - 10 of Hearts

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One more story to link to ;)
I'm putting up the plot line rather than the summary.


Dantalion is a demon, and like all demons he must feed on human blood and souls. He leaves hell for earth every time his hunger becomes unbearable (which might take several years) and makes a pact with a human in which the human must provide him with willingly given blood and must also willingly allow him to prey on their souls once they are dead. In turn, Dantalion must do all the human asks of him.
Demons don't have gender, nor do they have a physical appearance of any kind. Upon being summoned to earth they take on the form that will please their master the most.

Gabriel, a f*cked up 18 year old with barely any sense of right and wrong accidentaly summons Dantalion. At first he freaks out, but when Dantalion introduces himself and explains that he can grant each of Gabriel's wishes, the boy agrees to sell his soul and let the demon feed on his blood.

...Turns out Gabriel is one masochist motherf*cker who doesn't give a sh*t about anyone, and together with a demon who has absolutely no morals just like him... chaos ensues. The whole story is basically about them having loads of hot steamy sado-masochist sex, killing and torturing a bunch of people, stealing cars and money, getting high on whatever drug you can think of and then retiring to the bahamas lol (joking about that last part)

And you know what the moral of the story is?
There isn't one.
No, Gabriel doesn't see the 'error' of his ways. Neither does something awful happen to him. Dantalion doesn't trick him, neither does he trick Dantalion. They don't fall in love (be it with each other or anyone else). There is no force for them to fight (so, no angels, no god, no pokemon fight with another kid that owns a demon). There's just... irresponsible, illegal and immoral fun.

Ok, there is a moral to the story xD
Fact is... I've seen many many many stories wherein a person is granted a [insert whatever here] that can make wishes come true. And then they ask for stupid things and things that don't really change their lives. Sometimes they get power-hungry but then they see they have to go back to being nice or whatever.
I think it's stupid o.o. Actually, I think it's completely unreal. Think about it... if YOU could do whatever you wanted, what would you do? You'd effing drop out of school, buy houses, cars, people, go shopping till you dropped, eat at a different restaurant everyday, meet a celebrity you're a fan of, travel around the world, get yourself a winged unicorn pony, kill people, make world peace, Anything!! Because you can do *ANYTHING* that you want o.o". I don't think people get that when they write these type of stories.
So I wanted to write one where a person was very human (and I'm gonna get bashed for this) because I think all humans, in reality, are egoist and animalistic. o.o By animalistic.. I mean like... thinking of us as animals with no social conduct, with no sense or right or wrong. Because what dictates what's moral or ethic or right or wrong is sociaty. Imagine a kid who raised itself on a jungle or something. They'd be completely different from us, right?

Err I'm going to sleep now XD

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RBGuerra's avatar
Amore, eu nunca cheguei a ler essa história. Tu chegasse a publicar? =*