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This is the reason why i decided to write this critique. I hope it helps somehow.
First of all there are two things that caught my eye. The character's proportions and lighting. The lighting it self is done well on monsters and the character, however the sky bothers me. I think the scene itself would have been lighter if the sky was really that bright. Technically my suggestion is to darken the sky to give more depth in the image. Doing that will make the viewer focus on the parts that are lit in the image (the character and the monsters).
Second point is the proportions of the character. To me her body seams a little unnatural. it feels like her rib cage is going 'above its borders'. Sure its possible to bend your body like this in real life but it would be very uncomfortable and maybe painful in a jump like this. Technically her right side rib cage is a little too low. To hopefully explain it better it can possibly be fixed be selecting her entire bottom (hips, legs) and rotating a bit to the right.
Another thing that can be added is the detail to the character she is shooting. This is by no means necessary and is just a little add on, your entire detailing in this painting is splendid. Why this add on? All the monsters around her have a very similar level of detail, thus the viewers eyes don't know where to focus next after the main character. Since this monster is important his detail should be more then any other monster.
This way the viewers eyes will focus on the character first then slowly move towards the monster. Also darker background will possibly make it easier to look through the image.
Hope this helps : )
Otherwise is really nice work I like that you put some effort into coloring all the stuff and shading. Really nice.
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